Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: mattib on July 09, 2012, 12:00:52 am
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So, I am working on my pixel art videoclip project (http://www.wayofthepixel.net/pixelation/index.php?topic=13294.0;wap2)
and with your help I've got to a first animation test, I would like some comments on it. The background is still work in progress, as the enemies, I still have to animate them
let me know, what does it feel like for you
http://www.swfcabin.com/open/1341764990
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no comments?
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Can you perhaps make a gif out of what you have and also post some stills?
I think that would help people in giving critique.
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Ok, I will surely do that.
I wanted to get some comments on how did it work as a whole, but in a few hours I'll post that!
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ok, some gifs. I don't know why graphics gale changes one skin color to white but whatever. Many of these movements are inspired by how Donatello moves in a TMNT game, but everything here is drawn from scratch on paper.
(http://i1143.photobucket.com/albums/n623/mattteo/bastone1-1.gif)
(http://i1143.photobucket.com/albums/n623/mattteo/bastone9.gif)
(http://i1143.photobucket.com/albums/n623/mattteo/bastone8.gif)
now some still png's that I actually used in the animation, here the colors are ok
(http://i1143.photobucket.com/albums/n623/mattteo/bastone80003.png)
(http://i1143.photobucket.com/albums/n623/mattteo/bastone80002.png)
(http://i1143.photobucket.com/albums/n623/mattteo/bastone50003.png)
(http://i1143.photobucket.com/albums/n623/mattteo/bastone50003.png)
(http://i1143.photobucket.com/albums/n623/mattteo/bastone40001.png)
(http://i1143.photobucket.com/albums/n623/mattteo/bastone40003.png)
(http://i1143.photobucket.com/albums/n623/mattteo/bastone20001.png)
(http://i1143.photobucket.com/albums/n623/mattteo/bastone10002.png)
every suggestion is welcome, as I am still a beginner with this technique but this project is really important to me
thank you very much
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so?
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As I previously said in another forum, I think this is excellent work. Awesome for a beginner, if you are one as you say you are.
I someone pushed me to be nitpicky maybe I would add more contrast to the clothes and more movement in his hair. But perhaps you imaged it really greased up.