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Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Souly on September 29, 2006, 11:08:44 pm

Title: Fighter pose
Post by: Souly on September 29, 2006, 11:08:44 pm

I saw this peice (http://pixeljoint.com/pixelart/14980.htm?sec=date) in the gallery back at PJ.
And was inspired to make this...

(http://punky.ensellitis.com/pixels/mousefighter.gif)
I haven't figured out a good way to do the legs yet.

- The image updates every time I save it.

Title: Re: Fighter pose
Post by: Souly on September 30, 2006, 05:22:07 pm

Sorry for the double post.
But I was wondering if anybody could do an edit sketch on the legs?
I just can't figure them out at all.

Title: Re: Fighter pose
Post by: 1up on September 30, 2006, 06:14:31 pm

not that good, but does this help?

(http://imagehost.ensellitis.com/images/620474551.gif)

i think the problem is that you've got him looking hunched over but his legs are straight. that doesn't really look normal.

Title: Re: Fighter pose
Post by: Souly on September 30, 2006, 06:52:51 pm

That only confuses me more.

Title: Re: Fighter pose
Post by: 1up on September 30, 2006, 06:57:52 pm

okay.... his upper body makes him look hunched over. and his legs just don't seem to fit with the body. so you need to bend his legs so it looks more.... normal

Title: Re: Fighter pose
Post by: Skull on September 30, 2006, 07:12:55 pm

If this sort of makes any sense.. A really rough sketch.. with a mouse..  :-\

(http://img174.imageshack.us/img174/4337/mousefighterfh3.gif)

Title: Re: Fighter pose
Post by: Souly on September 30, 2006, 07:18:19 pm

The legs look really short because of the long t-shirt.
It looks like they're all crunched together.

Title: Re: Fighter pose
Post by: Skull on September 30, 2006, 07:25:24 pm

Quote from: Souly on September 30, 2006, 07:18:19 pm

The legs look really short because of the long t-shirt.
It looks like they're all crunched together.

Ah, I see.. So I raised the knees, but the one on the left, was constently low.. :(  and rather too bent..

(http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/6236/mousefighterfh3wn7.gif)
I'm not very good at people.

Title: Re: Fighter pose
Post by: shaheen on September 30, 2006, 08:43:30 pm

(http://cross-changer.net/khris/images/soulyedit2.gif)(http://cross-changer.net/khris/images/soulyedit.gif)
First edit I've ever done, hopefully I helped.

Title: Re: Fighter pose
Post by: Souly on September 30, 2006, 09:22:19 pm

Well, Blick helped me with a more dynamic leg position back at PJ.
(http://punky.ensellitis.com/pixels/mousefighter.gif)

Title: Re: Fighter pose
Post by: Souly on October 01, 2006, 08:04:24 am

Double post again.
Just thought I'd list all the new updates...
(http://punky.ensellitis.com/pixels/mousefighter.gif)

-  Added LEGS thanks to Blick
- Thickened the legs
- Made some shoes, along with adding laces.
- Made the giant mouse weapon.
- Re-did some facial pixels (Made the nose smaller)

Title: Re: Fighter pose
Post by: Skull on October 01, 2006, 08:31:30 am

Quote from: Souly on October 01, 2006, 08:04:24 am

(http://punky.ensellitis.com/pixels/mousefighter.gif)

Sweet. Sorry I was unable to aid you with the legs, but they look awesome now.
The face looks better and the logo on the mouse is brilliant.. :D

Title: Re: Fighter pose
Post by: Meta|Fox on October 01, 2006, 08:36:18 am

you do know you can modify previous posts dont you?

Title: Re: Fighter pose
Post by: Souly on October 01, 2006, 08:50:30 am

Yes I do know there is a modify/edit button.
But it was also a scheme to try and get some C+C sooner cause the thread went down the page.

Title: Re: Fighter pose
Post by: Froli on October 04, 2006, 04:51:25 am

Hello Souly

how about this kind of leg pose? <don't mind the shoes, I know its big :P )  I also adjusted the characters elbows to make them more proportional to each other.

(http://img95.imageshack.us/img95/4088/fighterposeyt3.png)

Or how about this one

(http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/5875/stance2bj3.png)

Title: Re: Fighter pose
Post by: Jad on October 04, 2006, 07:00:06 pm

(http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v490/jadmadeyes/mousefighter.gif)

Minor edit to the feet; The pose might be a bit .. non-anatomical now, but it's dynamic :D I felt I had the feeling that his feet should be a bit more leaning on the ground and maybe that he was standing almost on his toes, a battle:y thing :]

The knee also bugged me, i felt it didn't have a lot of shape, so to say. So a little edit there too :]

Hope it helps somehow. Good luck dammit 0:! And nice work so far.