Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: notoalpena on July 15, 2009, 04:54:52 am
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I need help with this, I think I might of over done the aa but I'm not totally sure.
Here's what I have so far (I haven't attempted to fully aa the sword and I know I'm missing the details on the map):
(http://img40.imageshack.us/img40/118/notoalpenaminishlink2.png)
Reference:
http://www.rpgfan.com/pics/zelda-minishcap/art-001.jpg
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I like where this is going, although Link seems to be a bit chubby. :huh:
Also, his left foot looks...off...like he's standing on his toes or something.
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I noticed he was a bit chubby too, so I did a quick comparison with your reference. You have Link's shoulder even with his ear, but it should be more inward. In other words, he's too wide.
(http://i28.tinypic.com/2r2yskg.png)
Also, the feet on yours look a bit odd because of the angle they're placed at. Hope this helps!
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I noticed he was a bit chubby too, so I did a quick comparison with your reference. You have Link's shoulder even with his ear, but it should be more inward. In other words, he's too wide.
(http://i28.tinypic.com/2r2yskg.png)
Also, the feet on yours look a bit odd because of the angle they're placed at. Hope this helps!
Alrght I took a stab at making him thinner, moved the shoulder a bit and tried to straighten out the feet. :D
(http://img93.imageshack.us/img93/4036/notoalpenaminishlink.png)
Also added the map detail and made the beak longer on the hat.
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His head needs to be a lot bigger, it gives the cartoony look even if it isn't proportionally accurate, it will match the ref more.
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I have to agree, I think it's the size of his head(being so small) that is throwing off the look of the body in many ways.