Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: jimqode on November 20, 2005, 12:05:33 am

Title: There is something wrong with my robot
Post by: jimqode on November 20, 2005, 12:05:33 am

A short circuit maybe?

(http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c151/jimqode/SAD.gif)

Title: Re: There is something wrong with my robot
Post by: Xion on November 20, 2005, 12:47:28 am

Poor robot.
Maybe he's sad because his lower half is nonexistant. I think he would benefit from some LED eyes, or maybe some kind of texture to the "screen" area, because as he is, it looks like he has a black hole in his head. Some shinyness? Also, his neck looks too perfectly straight. The base of the neck is completely immobile, not to mention the fact that his collarbone has no...I dunno, it just doesn't connect, get it? It might look cool if you segmented it (the neck, that is.) and animated appropriately. Everything else = right on.

Title: Re: There is something wrong with my robot
Post by: Skipper on November 20, 2005, 12:53:12 am

Quote from: Xion Night on November 20, 2005, 12:47:28 am

... not to mention the fact that his collarbone has no...I dunno ...

No jugular notch, I think is what it's called.

Title: Re: There is something wrong with my robot
Post by: jimqode on November 20, 2005, 11:53:10 am

I got what you mean. You're right. i'll work on it tomorrow. Thank you for the critics..

Title: Re: There is something wrong with my robot
Post by: jimqode on November 20, 2005, 07:18:53 pm

Update!!

better shading, antenna-like stuff and noisy display

(http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c151/jimqode/SAD2.gif)

Title: Re: There is something wrong with my robot
Post by: Bo on November 20, 2005, 09:28:02 pm

much better in everyway