Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Drake on August 17, 2007, 01:23:28 pm
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I was working on this yestruday night and this morning, since i last posted HOPEFULLY my skills have improved, im currently working on a line art as well from... The guy who's doign all the Demons? I can't remember his name :P
But heres a random peice i was working on. It's not a sprite, it's not a portrait, it's just a doodle. Anything i do to improve?
(http://i179.photobucket.com/albums/w318/TehDrakeh/RandomPixelArt.jpg)
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You do seem to have improved, but that shading is pillow shaded. You could change this into a cow skull if you wanted :P.. by the way Arachne is who you're looking for.
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I was working on this yestruday night and this morning, since i last posted HOPEFULLY my skills have improved, im currently working on a line art as well from... The guy who's doign all the Demons? I can't remember his name :P
But heres a random peice i was working on. It's not a sprite, it's not a portrait, it's just a doodle. Anything i do to improve?
(http://i179.photobucket.com/albums/w318/TehDrakeh/RandomPixelArt.jpg)
Is it anything actually? O_o
It looks alright. It jagges a bit against the darrk background, and it has a somewhat low contrast.
Some of the dithering doesn't seem to help much.
And Arachne is not a guy by the way ;)
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I was working on this yestruday night and this morning, since i last posted HOPEFULLY my skills have improved, im currently working on a line art as well from... The guy who's doign all the Demons? I can't remember his name :P
But heres a random peice i was working on. It's not a sprite, it's not a portrait, it's just a doodle. Anything i do to improve?
(http://i179.photobucket.com/albums/w318/TehDrakeh/RandomPixelArt.jpg)
Is it anything actually? O_o
It looks alright. It jagges a bit against the darrk background, and it has a somewhat low contrast.
Some of the dithering doesn't seem to help much.
And Arachne is not a guy by the way ;)
Hehe, Sorry Arachne :P
Hopefully i get lineart done by monday. Anways, i've Gave it abit more brighter shade to it. And i done a random ten minute doodle on paint.
(http://i179.photobucket.com/albums/w318/TehDrakeh/RandomPixelArt.jpg) Before
(http://i179.photobucket.com/albums/w318/TehDrakeh/RandomPixelArt.png) After
(http://i179.photobucket.com/albums/w318/TehDrakeh/ShadowedFace.png) Ten minute doodle :D
Something i just relised as well, it;s saved in Jpg... I'll have to change that soon :hehe:
Edit; Ahh od thats really annoyed me saving that JPG! :hehe:
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Sorry for Double posting but i've had another update from it and deicded to try and make the light source come from above it, i doubt i've done well since im used to making the light come from my veiw becuase of Microing.
Also i decided to add a little... Thing in the middle. I think it's ment to be a hole? I don't actualy know. The whole peice i dunno what it acyualy it is. All i know is thats its a doodle i want to make better :P
Here's it is.
(http://i179.photobucket.com/albums/w318/TehDrakeh/RandomPixelArtV3.png)
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i have no idea what is that thing..and don`t know which part is near and which part is far...@_@,,
maybe it`s just me??
and each edges seems to be aa with the background which is dark..so even though the source of light is decided...i still can`t read it very well....
so it looks ok to me^^
PS: you can just ignore me..i even think my opinion on this is not important..>.,<
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I wont ignore it because everypeice of Feedback could be useful, anways i put the little beam of light thing upside down the lights acutaly coming from ^
Diraction not V