Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Arendule on April 24, 2012, 05:57:56 pm
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(http://i1199.photobucket.com/albums/aa463/arendule/Mountains.gif)
Hey again, I've decided to let the game I was working on wait. I clearly didn't know as much as I thought, heh. Anyways, this is just a scene of a river and some mountains. Trying to limit my palette to 4 and learn what I can from practice. This is my first try and I was just wondering if there are any big problems or things someone can notice before I start practicing them :).
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Hello,
It's a good idea to start with a smaller amount of colous, but I think you should get rid of those (out)lines in your picture unless you're going for a cartoony style. If you can't render the grass because it's to small, don't. I hope you don't mind I did a little edit. It's not particulary better. It's just mend to show what I mean. I hope it helps
(http://i.imgur.com/TcKNQ.png)
Toaster
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Awesome! That is exactly what I was looking for :). I'll give that a few looks over and compare. I'll make a new little scene and I'll post it just to make sure I got it xD.
I'll edit this not to bump x3.
*EDIT*
Here it is :)
(http://i1199.photobucket.com/albums/aa463/arendule/Scene2.png)
Just want to know if I am still on the right track, then I'll be off to practice like mad :P.