Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Vans on June 16, 2007, 05:53:53 am
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Hi guys, im making some sprites for a game, and i'd like to get some comments from pros :P :
(http://img237.imageshack.us/img237/6049/ubercutenesspr1.gif)
Thanks
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I'm not a pro by any means at all, but it looks great to me! Good job on the shading! I love the style you used!
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Okay, so I made some edits:
(http://img406.imageshack.us/img406/1770/rpgeditzy3.gif)
I added a light source, yours was like... yeah, I also added some AAing to it, gave it some more features and a more realistic color, I also put the eye glare in the correct direction.
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Okay, so I made some edits:
(http://img406.imageshack.us/img406/1770/rpgeditzy3.gif)
I added a light source, yours was like... yeah, I also added some AAing to it, gave it some more features and a more realistic color, I also put the eye glare in the correct direction.
The dithering doesn't work at all. Looks like his skin is extremly rough.
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bengoshia, your edit kinda took the whole style a step backwards. This base was perfectly fine with the simple style. I'm pretty sure it was made to look intentionally non-realistic. Just a guess.
This little base here is really cool, I might try and dress him up all snazzy like.
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beng's looks like its moldy
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Eh, I guess you guys are right, I was half-awake when I made that..... The point I wanted to originally get across was that the original sprite doesn't really have a light source.
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Not a bad edit. I think removing the mouth makes him look cuter and more RPG style. Some clothing could help. Good luck.
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Done! added hair, clothes and modified the base a bit :lol:
(http://img67.imageshack.us/img67/5784/newpu4.png)
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I like it a lot, that's very nice highlighting on the hair. One crit - he looks a little like he has a pot belly at 1x due to the lines on the sides of the shirt and the bit of shading just above the crotch. Makes it look like he's stuffed into his pants and bulging out. IMO, of course, and if that's what you wanted then it's great. It's great anyways!