Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: freespyryt on May 15, 2010, 12:52:32 am

Title: [WIP] Miner
Post by: freespyryt on May 15, 2010, 12:52:32 am

So I'm taking a short break from my other game to work on something new, hopefully up my skills a bit and get some more stamina to go back and work on that grass   :blind:
So here's a new thing I've been working on. He's a miner, I did it a different style than my first guy, as this is going to be a completely different type of game.
Walk animations:
(http://i43.tinypic.com/2d95zrp.gif)
(http://i40.tinypic.com/2n65jly.gif)
(http://i40.tinypic.com/34nk5kx.gif)
(http://i42.tinypic.com/2ymwvaw.gif)
I'm just looking for some C&C on this piece...
Side note: my boyfriend says the light on his hat looks funny and the outlines (or lack thereof), FWIW.

Title: Re: [WIP] Miner
Post by: Mokkan on May 20, 2010, 05:37:03 am

The side view looks a bit odd to me. There's no shading on the helmet, and the light on the helmet doesn't look like a light from the side. Also, the front and back views seem to imply that he's wearing pants, but the side view looks like a onesy or a jump suit.

Title: Re: [WIP] Miner
Post by: freespyryt on May 22, 2010, 06:43:05 pm

Thanks for the advice! I took it and here's the result of the changes:
(http://i47.tinypic.com/2lbc8k6.gif)
(http://i47.tinypic.com/28kswoh.gif)
(http://i47.tinypic.com/1nxtsx.gif)
(http://i48.tinypic.com/o7644k.gif)
I changed the light (making it smaller) and I tweaked the outline a bit. Also, I darkened the belt. Thanks for the advice!