Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Opacus on April 23, 2006, 05:34:33 am

Title: Sprites for my Doukutsu Monogatari (Cave Story) like game.
Post by: Opacus on April 23, 2006, 05:34:33 am

Well I made these sprites fora platform game I'm making.
It was inspired by Doukutsu Monogatari, as that game has some
really impressive sprites, music, and gameplay.
I'm making it with Gamemaker.

(http://img114.imageshack.us/img114/8035/gamespritestrans7kp.gif)

C&c apreciated

Title: Re: Sprites for my Doukutsu Monogatari (Cave Story) like game.
Post by: Alex on April 23, 2006, 07:29:57 am

i like the bats and the scenery brick dealy but the selout needs some work, the character is also terribly cliche looking, not to mention the fact that i would plug something into his face.

Title: Re: Sprites for my Doukutsu Monogatari (Cave Story) like game.
Post by: Andy Tran on April 23, 2006, 07:51:31 am

 I like them Zol. Doukutsu was one of my favorite platformers. Though it's in japanese. Maybe add a gun to the head. You're working on a GM project? I am interested in making it with you. I've played that game and it's pretty fun. PM me if you want.

Title: Re: Sprites for my Doukutsu Monogatari (Cave Story) like game.
Post by: Opacus on April 23, 2006, 12:57:47 pm

'Thanks.
I'll think about your proposal.
And there is an english translation, if you want to now.

Title: Re: Sprites for my Doukutsu Monogatari (Cave Story) like game.
Post by: Andy Tran on April 23, 2006, 10:17:40 pm

 Sure, english version is good.

Title: Re: Sprites for my Doukutsu Monogatari (Cave Story) like game.
Post by: Opacus on April 24, 2006, 05:14:50 am

Hey Andy_tran, are you good at programing in gm?
If so, you could help me.
I've decided what the name is going to be:
Gokusha Monogarati, which means jail/prison story/legend.

Title: Re: Sprites for my Doukutsu Monogatari (Cave Story) like game.
Post by: Andy Tran on April 24, 2006, 08:11:44 am

 PM me about the game. I don't really know GML. But I make basic gm games like the side shooters. Platforms, haven't gotten to that stage yet. My friend has made a good platform example found here:

 z-games.net

 

Title: Re: Sprites for my Doukutsu Monogatari (Cave Story) like game.
Post by: yosh64 on April 24, 2006, 09:13:26 am

hey

Looks pretty nice, well I think it's a brave feat to continue in the footsteps of Doukutsu Monogatori [Cave Story], as it wa such a great game!

I myself have looked into the Doukutsu Monogatori Sprites and Tiles before, and to me they looked very well done, with great style. Hmm, well I have no great concerns with your pixels right now, well your tiles look to lack highlights? edit... also, I was just thinking your tiles look rather flat? but yea, still early days... would like to see how this all turns out.

But yea I also would like to make a game alike Metroid or Doukutsu Monogatori, but nevermind that.

cya

Title: Re: Sprites for my Doukutsu Monogatari (Cave Story) like game.
Post by: Tinygiant on April 24, 2006, 10:34:59 am

I dont want to rain on your parade but if this is your first game I'd start smaller and simpler than a Doukutsu Monogator/metroid inspired epic, I doubt Doukutsu Monogator was Pixels first game somehow.

Title: Re: Sprites for my Doukutsu Monogatari (Cave Story) like game.
Post by: Opacus on April 24, 2006, 11:29:33 am

It's not really my first game, I've been using gamemaker for over
3 years now.
I just never finished a project.

Thanks for the crits.

Highlights are a good one, I'll add those.

Title: Re: Sprites for my Doukutsu Monogatari (Cave Story) like game.
Post by: Tinygiant on April 24, 2006, 04:18:30 pm

Quote from: Shadow Wolf on April 24, 2006, 11:29:33 am

It's not really my first game, I've been using gamemaker for over
3 years now.
I just never finished a project.

Thanks for the crits.

Highlights are a good one, I'll add those.

In that case hurry up and make it :P