Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: 0nepixel on September 04, 2016, 07:33:40 am

Title: i need help with my tree
Post by: 0nepixel on September 04, 2016, 07:33:40 am

Hi, i need help whit this, i really don´t know how to make a god pixel art tree (light source, leaves etc), so i try my best, all suggestions and tips are welcome  :)
(http://www.subeimagenes.com/img/arbolito-1656287.png)

Title: Re: i need help with my tree
Post by: MysteryMeat on September 04, 2016, 10:00:13 am

I'd say your best succeeded. It's a good tree, great texture on bark and leaves. Symmetry, though rare in nature, is pleasant to the eye here. My only real suggestion would be to try a variety of trees. Dead ones, scraggly ones, droopy, bent, unusual etc.

Title: Re: i need help with my tree
Post by: Curly on September 04, 2016, 04:46:19 pm

Woah it looks very good. I will never have the patience to make such detailed leaves :lol:

Title: Re: i need help with my tree
Post by: 0nepixel on September 04, 2016, 07:46:54 pm

Quote from: MysteryMeat on September 04, 2016, 10:00:13 am

I'd say your best succeeded. It's a good tree, great texture on bark and leaves. Symmetry, though rare in nature, is pleasant to the eye here. My only real suggestion would be to try a variety of trees. Dead ones, scraggly ones, droopy, bent, unusual etc.

I will thanks for the advise  :)

Title: Re: i need help with my tree
Post by: 0nepixel on September 05, 2016, 12:52:16 am

(http://i.giphy.com/3o7TKpi1QhAUz1qE6c.gif)

Title: Re: i need help with my tree
Post by: eishiya on September 05, 2016, 11:25:17 am

Any plans for a pixel-based animation of it?
This looks nice, but feels "automated" since it's entire chunks of pixels being dragged around the image, and pixels are getting distorted. The leaves themselves aren't actually moving or turning. The range and type of motion feels very nice though, so this could be a good start to refine from.

Title: Re: i need help with my tree
Post by: Vinik on September 06, 2016, 03:14:10 am

I only a beginner, but I like it very much, and I can only fear the day I will set myself to make a good tree, by looking one can feel the hard work it takes. I specially like the counterlight. My I ask if the palette was a general porpose one or made specifically for the tree?

Title: Re: i need help with my tree
Post by: 0nepixel on September 06, 2016, 06:57:18 pm

Quote from: Vinik on September 06, 2016, 03:14:10 am

I only a beginner, but I like it very much, and I can only fear the day I will set myself to make a good tree, by looking one can feel the hard work it takes. I specially like the counterlight. My I ask if the palette was a general porpose one or made specifically for the tree?

i was trying to emulate the tree´s animation of titan soul, but is really hard  :yell:

Title: Re: i need help with my tree
Post by: BatElite on September 08, 2016, 04:11:22 pm

(http://i.imgur.com/mIeJ1Ic.png)

The largest problem I can find with it is that the leaves as a whole aren't lit like the trunk. The roots in front aren't particularly convincing to me.

Otherwise good job.

Title: Re: i need help with my tree
Post by: 0nepixel on September 08, 2016, 11:33:17 pm

Quote from: BatElite on September 08, 2016, 04:11:22 pm

(http://i.imgur.com/mIeJ1Ic.png)

The largest problem I can find with it is that the leaves as a whole aren't lit like the trunk. The roots in front aren't particularly convincing to me.

Otherwise good job.

Thanks!, yeah i need to learn more about light source  :P