Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Nonamezleft on October 21, 2006, 08:15:39 pm

Title: [WIP]Also New to Pixeling =]
Post by: Nonamezleft on October 21, 2006, 08:15:39 pm

Well,I just discovered the world of pixeling and this is the pixel I'm working on atm..
(http://img168.imageshack.us/img168/5023/piratemonsterky9.png)
I don't quite know what it will be but I'm looking for hard C&C and suggestions, also edits are greatly welcomed. :) I believe I need quite a lot of help with the palette, it just doesn't look right.
~Thanks for all your help and....Love Ya'll! :-* :P

Title: Re: [WIP]Also New to Pixeling =]
Post by: VictorR on October 21, 2006, 08:26:54 pm

believe it or not u have a great pallette ill do an edit

Title: Re: [WIP]Also New to Pixeling =]
Post by: TheAbyss on October 21, 2006, 10:06:11 pm

Dam you and your great pallete!!!!!! I can't do a good pallete...  :'(  *sob* It's quite good I think...not that that means anything coming from me.....

Title: Re: [WIP]Also New to Pixeling =]
Post by: cpaw88 on October 22, 2006, 05:06:38 am

I personally think you way over dithered on this peice, the nosie doesn't look right either, besides that great work.

Title: Re: [WIP]Also New to Pixeling =]
Post by: Nonamezleft on October 22, 2006, 06:45:06 am

Quote from: cpaw88 on October 22, 2006, 05:06:38 am

I personally think you way over dithered on this peice, the nosie doesn't look right either, besides that great work.

Well the nose is supposed to be like two tubes sticking out of his face. Anyways thanks guys, I'm looking for more crits, I also have a new version I'll post soon.

Title: Re: [WIP]Also New to Pixeling =]
Post by: cpaw88 on October 22, 2006, 09:49:48 am

This is kinda what I meant, not a big change just something small.

Your's -->  (http://img168.imageshack.us/img168/5023/piratemonsterky9.png)     My Edit -- > (http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/7645/image1zp1.png)

Title: Re: [WIP]Also New to Pixeling =]
Post by: rabidbaboy on October 22, 2006, 02:50:16 pm

I think use the same amount of detail on the teeth as on the face, as at the moment, the teeth pop out at the viewer too much. And I don't see why you have to dither on the collar instead of using a solid color, the dark gray isn't used anywhere else except on the nostril, and it isn't dithered there.

Title: Re: [WIP]Also New to Pixeling =]
Post by: Nonamezleft on October 22, 2006, 05:34:27 pm

Ok, I did a little update...not much.
(http://img53.imageshack.us/img53/6676/piratemonsterfz6.png)

@rabidbaboy: I'm not even close to being done with the collar and hat...I'm sorta stuck on them.
                Also, how would you suggest I make the teeth stand out less? Thanks.