Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: pyxelbit on July 29, 2014, 12:11:20 pm

Title: [C+C] Portrait [WIP]
Post by: pyxelbit on July 29, 2014, 12:11:20 pm

First try on a portrait and a slightly bigger sprite. Its not finished, but im having trouble refining it more. Any tips, critizism, edits welcome.

(http://image-upload.de/get/JgHkwM/1d4cd21959.png)


Also, first post! Hello everyone   :D

Title: Re: [C+C] Portrait [WIP]
Post by: Snow Fenrir on July 29, 2014, 08:20:06 pm

Light source is defined and it's more fleshed out than most portraits I see  ;D

I recommend changing the lock at the left side of her face so you can see the cheeck's outline and lower the cheeckbone a bit on the right side and flesh out her face a little bit more. So far it looks very skinny and the fact there is a lot going on in the line right under her eyes gives her a gollum-like appearance in my opinion. Her ear could be a little more flat as well.