Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: PixelatedCorpse on February 27, 2015, 02:32:09 pm

Title: PixelatedCorpse's Sprite (C+C) Any advice welcomed :D
Post by: PixelatedCorpse on February 27, 2015, 02:32:09 pm

New to the forums, newish to pixel art.

These are animation sprites for a game that I am working on.
(http://www.pixeljoint.com/files/icons/full/spr_enemy_worm_0.gif)

(http://www.pixeljoint.com/files/icons/full/rat_run_0.1.gif)

(http://www.pixeljoint.com/files/icons/full/batflying1.gif)

So far its just these, the first is an attack animation, the second a run, and the last one is just an idle animation.

Title: Re: PixelatedCorpse's Sprite (C+C) Any advice welcomed :D
Post by: AlcopopStar on March 04, 2015, 12:27:15 pm

These are cute, the mouse especially, but there are a lot of stray pixels here and the animation is quite messy and jagged. The sprites your animating also have some issues beyond animation with some problematic line work and shading. This all might be easier if you focused on one thing for the time being. Perhaps try creating a single still sprite first, we can critique that, and then you can move to animating it.  :)