Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: SirBilly on April 18, 2010, 02:57:44 am
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Howdy!
Another bird for you to chew on! Is it ready for Pixeljoint yet you think? If not so, I'd love to find out why! Thanksy you!
(http://i39.tinypic.com/2iqeeww.jpg)
EDIT1:
(http://i41.tinypic.com/16ks7k3.png)
EDIT2:
(http://i41.tinypic.com/15dvs6r.png)
EDIT3:
(http://i40.tinypic.com/2lbngur.jpg)
EDIT4:
(http://i41.tinypic.com/307ond0.png)
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Go back to #3, the cloud thing looks great, the curves really contrast nicely with the angles of the bird; maybe smooth it out a bit though.
The wings look nice, but the top half lacks volume in comparison.
Also, nice colours.
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Go back to #3, the cloud thing looks great, the curves really contrast nicely with the angles of the bird; maybe smooth it out a bit though.
The wings look nice, but the top half lacks volume in comparison.
Also, nice colours.
Perhaps something towards this direction?
EDIT5:
(http://i43.tinypic.com/5eicg7.png)
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New version is good. I like it. ;D Maybe some anti-aliasing?
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(http://i41.tinypic.com/334oydc.jpg)
I guess AA looks better at some places, especially on the back and on the head. I really think the wing can be improved as well, right now it looks like a black gap on the bottom.
And I get the feeling that something is missing, it looks so simple.
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I must say I really dislike the faux graffiti splodge styled background - I think you could get some really interesting shapes and forms into it if you went further with the detail. I'm imagining a larger array of smaller bubbles, more curves... hmm hard to explain. Not keen on the large cirlces and straight drips. Love the bird.
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I must say I really dislike the faux graffiti splodge styled background - I think you could get some really interesting shapes and forms into it if you went further with the detail. I'm imagining a larger array of smaller bubbles, more curves... hmm hard to explain. Not keen on the large cirlces and straight drips. Love the bird.
It isn't exactly hard to imagine there's a more suitable background for it, perhaps the 'splodge spray' is not the "one". Guess if there should be a background at all is should be somewhat in style with the bird, I'm thinking colours.
Here's my inspiration source http://mattsewell.co.uk/?p=744 (http://mattsewell.co.uk/)
And:
(http://mattsewell.co.uk/wp-content/uploads/rspb1.jpg)
Forest background? Clouds? The bird in a tree?
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Edited some more again. Played around with colors, mabye the backgrounds are to noisy and draws too much attention away from the bird.
Here they are anyways:
(http://i43.tinypic.com/2hd8tfs.gif)
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Loving the second one. First is too boring, third looks like someone spilled something and you're looking at it top-down, fourth is way too busy. Keep up the good work!
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Thanks!
I peeped over at Google and searched for some real photos of 'Blue Tits', lol, and made a quick edit from what they looked like. It kinda looks like an parrot almost. Does it look better?
(http://i41.tinypic.com/23kc1zq.gif)
(http://ic2.pbase.com/g3/71/36871/3/54151593.04_Bluetit.jpg)
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ho it's that bird you were based on ? well, these bird have various pattern so, it's never same for some reasoin ^^; i have plenty bird of these during winter, i'm not sure if i will have more tomorrow... ^^;
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I think the previous idea is better than the latest update perhaps, the new ones aren't as simple, and I think the simplicity really makes this piece. Happy with the result I'm loading it up on PJ!