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Rose Among Thorns

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Skipper:
Ignore cheesy titles.

entivore:
Interesting color effect.  The nostril holes seem to stand out a little too much for my taste though.  They are the very first thing I notice when I look at the pic, even before the eyes.

Pawige:
The left (her left) side of her lips is kinda messed up, I'd also try dropping the darkest green that's right under her lower lip, it might look better. The nostrils are a tad too small and sharp edged, maybe it'd be better to just use the greens there. Her left eye could perhaps use a bit more shadow on the outer edge.

That said, I rather like it. Interesting composition and colors.

.TakaM:
i keep reading this topic as "rose among thongs" damn that'd hurt too... :-X

and on topic; it looks pretty cool, you stretched the face a little vertically.. and the purple nostrils are bugging me too.. thats all I can really mention. a very cool piece :)

Crazy Asian Gamer:
Most definitely you, Skipper. :D
No really. ::)
Aside from the other crits, I'd say that the contour of the hairline is a bit off.

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