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KOS'06 Sprite

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Cow:

10 colors. Uses his arcade machine as a weapon. That is all.
PS. Portrait coming soon.

reydragk:
I'm not sure why, maybe it's the color choice, but the pic looks kinda blurry...sorry I can't give tips on improvement, I don't know what would fix it...

Helm:
blurry cause of very dark blanketshading. Looks as if all the lines are double or triple width. The lighting is inconsistent and badly applied generally. Anatomy issues. This needs a lot of work, it's a good concept, but you have to work at it from the ground up. Doing fighter sprites when anatomy and lighting are issues is overkill. Go back to the basics and fix from the ground up.

Cow:
I understand I need to work on it more. Expect a complete revision soon. :)

Cow:

Is this one any better?

EDIT: Hmm.... seems I forgot to shade the yellow part.

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