Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: skoby on July 20, 2007, 04:46:44 pm

Title: 32x64 sprite [WIP]
Post by: skoby on July 20, 2007, 04:46:44 pm

Very basic I know but I havent done a sprite in well over a year and want some feedback on it before I do more detail.  The clothes are just for display until decide whether the game will have paperdoll or not so not soo fussed about them.  I will post more once Ive done it but if could criticise what Ive done so far Id be very grateful :)

(http://img510.imageshack.us/img510/3729/sprite1tr6.png)

Title: Re: 32x64 sprite [WIP]
Post by: lilwing on July 20, 2007, 05:30:54 pm

it looks like either a really young man wearing a fake beard, or santa claus with his hair dyed blond.

what's it supposed to be?

Title: Re: 32x64 sprite [WIP]
Post by: Faceless on July 21, 2007, 03:50:20 am

It's a guy in a suit. ¬_¬

Anyway, his shoulders are far too broad, and if you were aiming for perspective, you've failed at it.
Right now he looks like a Rugby player in a suit. Take a look at other sprites in a similar perspective and adjust accordingly.