It seems like people gave you a lot of good edits to work with, but I wanted to talk about why your original wasn't really working out so here you go! Plus a bonus doodle because I sat on this for a million years until it was barely relevant anymore. ;_; My edit isn't very polished but I hope you can take something useful away from it!
(https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/17067479/edit/bewitched.png)(https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/17067479/edit/bewitched.gif)
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