Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: 1up on February 03, 2009, 11:28:11 pm

Title: [wip] taste the rainbow. smoke the rainbow.
Post by: 1up on February 03, 2009, 11:28:11 pm

(http://img22.imageshack.us/img22/3116/woahzt9.png)
not even sure what was going through my head when i made this, but whatever

feel free to tear it up as much as you can, i need the advice after not pixelling since forever ago

Title: Re: [wip] taste the rainbow. smoke the rainbow.
Post by: Jakten on February 04, 2009, 04:41:11 am

It's looking pretty sweet so far! Not much to say currently as it's not far into being done but I love the colours so far. Touch it up a bit more and I'll give you some better crits.

Title: Re: [wip] taste the rainbow. smoke the rainbow.
Post by: Mathias on February 04, 2009, 02:47:04 pm

Make the "smoke trails" transparently blend into eachother like the valvoline or ebay logo, which introduce a new spot color where shapes overlap. If anything, do something to make them less solid and more wispy and light.

Title: Re: [wip] taste the rainbow. smoke the rainbow.
Post by: 1up on February 05, 2009, 04:09:49 pm

i'll try to make the smoke look better when im done focusing so much on the actual face so for now here's a slight update
(http://img4.imageshack.us/img4/1808/woahlg0.png)

Title: Re: [wip] taste the rainbow. smoke the rainbow.
Post by: Hydronium on February 08, 2009, 03:56:34 am

Well, the area between his eyes is kind of confusing. I can't tell what's going on around there... is he furrowing his brow? Does he have a nose? I think you should clean up that bit to make it more readable.

Love the geometric shapes on his forehead and cheek, though.