Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: MadeyeMike on February 14, 2008, 02:15:23 am

Title: Pink Rose
Post by: MadeyeMike on February 14, 2008, 02:15:23 am

Some help please.
 What should I change?

(http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a252/MadeyeMike/Rose2.png)

Title: Re: Pink Rose
Post by: mattpk on February 15, 2008, 12:12:32 am

(http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj170/edwiningqwe/rose1.gif)

It isn't a very good update, but i just think the middle should be a bit more separated from the second-from-center layer.

Title: Re: Pink Rose
Post by: Corridor on February 15, 2008, 04:31:54 am

Maybe some outer petals that seperate outward from the bud. Even if you want it to just stay as a rosebud, it should probably have some petals at least curling out a little bit. And perhaps you could make the centre darker to indicate shadows and stuff.

Otherwise it's pretty decent though.