Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Serena on March 10, 2007, 11:29:47 pm
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I decided to put these two in the same topic so I'm not spamming up the forums.
(http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v492/Sererena/tree.gif)
Mirrored Tree..4 hours (ignored the mirrored pallette in the corner :P)
11 colors including transparency
(http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v492/Sererena/girlfighter3.gif)
Fighter Girl... 2.5 hours
16 colors including transparency
Both are from sketches I produced. I shrunk 'em down and reduced the colors to create a base shape to work from. I've taken them about as far as I can go for today, but feedback is useful! ^^
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I think mirroring is a good idea to get the structure correct but it looks too repetative if just left, imo I would make some changes to the mirrored side so it doesn't look obviously mirrored. adding more of a light source too would sevearly alter the shadowing on one side.
I really like these both, your character is vry cute.
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Hey there Serena. Your tree looks great :), I know about a game that would like to have such a tree.
Liking your fighter girl too ;).
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I love the colouring and detail on the tree leaves but I'm not a fan of the stump and it being mirrored.. . perhaps less detail on the tree stump?
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Wow i really like this tree :o... Even if its mirrored the leaves part looks really good :).
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I don't mind most of the mirroring for the tree, but the top of it doesn't look as well mirrored, perhaps if it didn't extend as high or curved in slightly faster. Also I agree about the stump being mirrored simply because the roots look odd that way although if you don't want to change from mirroring it the only thing I have said that is valid refers to the top of the tree,