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Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: tomster 785 on September 15, 2006, 07:00:52 pm

Title: a sprite I made for a battle on "PIXEL forums"
Post by: tomster 785 on September 15, 2006, 07:00:52 pm
32x32 8 colors (took about 8 miniutes)

here (http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/8008/devil8colourenemyspriteol2.png)
this is for the first round... the second round is a boss; and that decides it
Title: Re: a sprite I made for a battle on "PIXEL forums"
Post by: Skull on September 15, 2006, 07:05:43 pm
A quick spruce up, could have you adding some detail/texture to the creature, tattoos or scars or something. Since at the moment it's good for the size and idea but just lacking a little.

Best of luck for the battle.
Title: Re: a sprite I made for a battle on "PIXEL forums"
Post by: tomster 785 on September 15, 2006, 07:07:26 pm
I'm only allowed 8 colours... I was really restrcting myself with this peice I'll add that scar thing and I'll try for a skull tattoo type thing (because the claws are white)

EDIT: well here is the new version this is like two seconds of extra work (http://img76.imageshack.us/img76/3039/devil8colourenemyspritev2tg6.png)
Title: Re: a sprite I made for a battle on "PIXEL forums"
Post by: Gil on September 15, 2006, 07:33:29 pm
You're using too much colours for what you're getting. You can easily make this with 4 or 5 colours and it would look the same. Drop the saturation, remove the background, don't use coloured outlines, give it some texture, shapes, anatomy and add some hue shifts perhaps?

Oh, btw, stop running away from your previous topics and fix those pieces first.
Title: Re: a sprite I made for a battle on "PIXEL forums"
Post by: tomster 785 on September 15, 2006, 07:39:01 pm
I know but I want to win this battle
Title: Re: a sprite I made for a battle on "PIXEL forums"
Post by: Alex on September 15, 2006, 07:40:25 pm
For 482 seconds of work, i dont know what to say. Quite frankly, im dumbfounded.

Much improvement needs to be done here. 8 colours is quite alot for a piece of that size. Use more variation. Don't try and shade everything. Just practice different techniques. Don't be afraid to screw anything up either because if you cooperate with us, we will help you fix them.
Title: Re: a sprite I made for a battle on "PIXEL forums"
Post by: tomster 785 on September 15, 2006, 07:47:27 pm
I'm sorry to seem if I'm arguing with you with this but I cant take away the outline without taking away the scar and then I wouldnt of taken away any colors at all, and
@Gil: I wasnt running away from those peices I had to make this for a battle (read first post)
Title: Re: a sprite I made for a battle on "PIXEL forums"
Post by: ptoing on September 15, 2006, 08:34:10 pm
I wanted to make a little edit of your devil but I went a bit overboard I think.

(http://ptoing.net/devil.png)(http://img76.imageshack.us/img76/3039/devil8colourenemyspritev2tg6.png)

Hope it helps a bit to show you what can be donw with 8 colours in that size. Problem is that your colours are too close to be told apart so you basically waste some of them, And in small sprites it's not a good idea to have a solid outline like that, unless they only have 4 colours or less.
Title: Re: a sprite I made for a battle on "PIXEL forums"
Post by: tomster 785 on September 15, 2006, 09:09:04 pm
cool thanks ;D
Title: Re: a sprite I made for a battle on "PIXEL forums"
Post by: Pawige on September 15, 2006, 09:27:59 pm
(http://gerla.us/paul/devil8colourenemyspriteol2.png)

Ptoing totally beat me.
Title: Re: a sprite I made for a battle on "PIXEL forums"
Post by: ptoing on September 15, 2006, 09:43:03 pm
That's very sexy, Pawidge.
Title: Re: a sprite I made for a battle on "PIXEL forums"
Post by: Gil on September 15, 2006, 10:31:47 pm
10 bucks says he'll enter one of those two sprites for the competition :D
Title: Re: a sprite I made for a battle on "PIXEL forums"
Post by: Helm on September 15, 2006, 10:35:44 pm
A stark lack of currency says please stick to the topic.
Title: Re: a sprite I made for a battle on "PIXEL forums"
Post by: hate on September 16, 2006, 01:22:24 am
(http://img80.imageshack.us/img80/878/dvlhj7.gif)
got bored and made that huge biceps half horse quite devilish tihng
and borrowed palettes from ptoing n pawige.
funny heheheheh

dont do drugs
Title: Re: a sprite I made for a battle on "PIXEL forums"
Post by: Frychiko on September 16, 2006, 02:33:23 am
Hot-ass demons boys.
Tomster, is your demon jumping? he doesn't look like he's standing.

p.s. If you were me, You'd at least spend a good 20 minutes on it.

Title: Re: a sprite I made for a battle on "PIXEL forums"
Post by: Xion on September 16, 2006, 02:51:19 am
Note, man: Things look much different zoomed in than at 1x or even 2x. What may look like an outline or dark red close up may probably be identical to another color zoomed out. Make sure the colors are nice and seperate. This is called contrast. The higher the contrast, the more different the colors. This is especially important in smaller images where you don't have enough room to have lots of subtle color changes.
Title: Re: a sprite I made for a battle on "PIXEL forums"
Post by: Meta|Fox on September 16, 2006, 05:08:17 am
just wondering, whats the link to the PIXEL forum your doing this battle at?
Title: Re: a sprite I made for a battle on "PIXEL forums"
Post by: tomster 785 on September 16, 2006, 08:42:41 am
link (http://z14.invisionfree.com/Pixel/index.php?)

@Frychiko: nah he's standing
@Xion Night: what do you mean? every color that looks the same is the same
@Gil: I've already entered mine... and I wouldnt use one of those even if I was payed a million pounds, I dont rip, it's against everything I go by
Title: Re: a sprite I made for a battle on "PIXEL forums"
Post by: Skull on September 16, 2006, 09:18:08 am
(http://gerla.us/paul/devil8colourenemyspriteol2.png)

Ptoing totally beat me.

I'm just getting total DOOM flashbacks.. awesome work.
Title: Re: a sprite I made for a battle on "PIXEL forums"
Post by: tomster 785 on September 16, 2006, 09:19:35 am
It does sorta look like it should be a mini doom enemy, doesnt it
Title: Re: a sprite I made for a battle on "PIXEL forums"
Post by: ptoing on September 16, 2006, 09:44:23 am
(http://gerla.us/paul/devil8colourenemyspriteol2.png)

Ptoing totally beat me.

I'm just getting total DOOM flashbacks.. awesome work.

Hahaha indeed. Looks like a Baron of Hell :D
Title: Re: a sprite I made for a battle on "PIXEL forums"
Post by: tomster 785 on September 16, 2006, 09:51:40 am
I thought it was called an imp ???
Title: Re: a sprite I made for a battle on "PIXEL forums"
Post by: ptoing on September 16, 2006, 10:09:04 am
Imp
(http://www.easton.demon.co.uk/doom/pictures/trooa1.gif)

Baron of Hell
(http://www.easton.demon.co.uk/doom/pictures/bossb1.gif)
Title: Re: a sprite I made for a battle on "PIXEL forums"
Post by: tomster 785 on September 16, 2006, 10:16:12 am
oh, well they look very similar, who heres played doom 3 (j/k too off-topic) I have (even though I'm 12)
Title: Re: a sprite I made for a battle on "PIXEL forums"
Post by: Joseph on September 19, 2006, 11:36:23 pm
I thought you were 13?  or...wait.  are you 14?  maybe you should get a myspace or something and in large bold letters, PUT YOUR REAL AGE.  anyway, ptoing...I seriously thought you grabbed that from a sprite sheet of a 2D platform game using 3D sprites...lol great work on making it 3Dish.
Title: Re: a sprite I made for a battle on "PIXEL forums"
Post by: tomster 785 on September 20, 2006, 04:55:27 pm
I'm 13 now I had my birthday 2 days ago, YAYZ for me :P
Title: Re: a sprite I made for a battle on "PIXEL forums"
Post by: ptoing on September 20, 2006, 05:10:02 pm
I thought you were 13?  or...wait.  are you 14?  maybe you should get a myspace or something and in large bold letters, PUT YOUR REAL AGE.  anyway, ptoing...I seriously thought you grabbed that from a sprite sheet of a 2D platform game using 3D sprites...lol great work on making it 3Dish.

which one do you mean? the Imp and Baron of Hell are from Doom, which was done by id soft in 95(?)
Title: Re: a sprite I made for a battle on "PIXEL forums"
Post by: tomster 785 on September 20, 2006, 05:15:31 pm
you didnt make them did you? if so awesome work on it the likeness is uncanny
Title: Re: a sprite I made for a battle on "PIXEL forums"
Post by: ptoing on September 20, 2006, 05:20:26 pm

ME
(http://ptoing.net/devil.png)


ID SOFT (also this is not really pixelart)
Imp
(http://www.easton.demon.co.uk/doom/pictures/trooa1.gif)

Baron of Hell
(http://www.easton.demon.co.uk/doom/pictures/bossb1.gif)

And I thought Doom was general knowledge, I could recognise each enemy from the original doom games by it's sounds. Doom 3 is poop in comparison!
Title: Re: a sprite I made for a battle on "PIXEL forums"
Post by: Joo on October 04, 2006, 09:28:24 pm
Pretty hard to distinguish what it is... And why are the legs a totally different colour to the red blob thing?
Btw, finding it hilarious how all your topics are getting locked.
Title: Re: a sprite I made for a battle on "PIXEL forums"
Post by: ptoing on October 04, 2006, 09:37:51 pm
also tomster is banned