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New pixel art..... :P

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AdamAtomic:
There really isn't much to crit there; there's no lighting or details.  The thick highlight you've put on the one edge is nonsensical.  The first thing you should do is add some very broad lighting and shading to give it some depth, and then go ahead and jump into the details.

Helm:

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Kren:
Helm: i really like yours, how you reused some colours and the window colours.

Br3ttieBoi: you should try to add some texture to it, how do you want to improve if you never try new stuff?

rabidbaboy:
that building was really boring.
Helm's edit improved it a lot, but there usn't much going on there.
ever heard of Isocity by that KennethFejer (sp?) guy?i don't have a link, sorry, can someone give it to him?thanks.
put animations, people, animals, etc. lots of things can be made to make this building more interesting.and i mean you should do it. making the template is, what, 1/2, 1/4 of the work.trust me, you'll get better that way too. ;)

cheers.

Br3ttieBoi:
Ty i have been on iso city and this isnt a city im making its more of an like umm how do i explain it, well the picture i drew in english, is like a building, with a ufo attack, a plane crashed, a pile up etg like were loads of things have happaned, abd ty very much for editing my piece it looks wonderfull, thats the thing i wouldnt know were to like shade etg, i have tried but just cantr reely do it, can any one help me or give me any tips?

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