Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: David on December 12, 2006, 10:09:00 am

Title: A little dump of little dumplings.
Post by: David on December 12, 2006, 10:09:00 am

(http://www.iamnotoriginal.com/images/pixel/sketches/yankee.png)
(http://www.iamnotoriginal.com/images/pixel/sketches/despair_02.png)
(http://www.iamnotoriginal.com/images/pixel/sketches/guardian_02.png)
(http://www.iamnotoriginal.com/images/pixel/sketches/maple_city.png)
(http://www.iamnotoriginal.com/images/pixel/sketches/happy_birthday_noe.png)
(http://www.iamnotoriginal.com/images/pixel/xob_kcalb_ma_i.gif)
(http://www.iamnotoriginal.com/images/pixel/sketches/ocular.png)
(http://www.iamnotoriginal.com/images/pixel/sketches/miguel.png)(http://www.iamnotoriginal.com/images/pixel/sketches/miguel_02.png)
(http://www.iamnotoriginal.com/images/pixel/animations/tripping.gif)
(http://www.iamnotoriginal.com/images/pixel/animations/rainbow_sperm.gif)

I just felt like sharing.

Title: Re: A little dump of little dumplings.
Post by: Tremulant on December 12, 2006, 12:20:45 pm

These are sweet, except for that third one; I mean, the execution is alright, but the design is way off.

Anyway, you know that in the past your stuff has lead to the development some strange, awkward man-crush on my part, and this stuff really just builds on that, so take my conflicted emotions for.. whatever they're worth...  :-\

Dunno if you were looking for crits, and I don't really have any anyway. You could maybe try some aa in places, smooth out some of the jaggies.

Title: Re: A little dump of little dumplings.
Post by: Rydin on December 12, 2006, 01:30:15 pm

I love you color choices...maybe its because I'm no anatomy expert, but I love the third one....so snes contra/metroid-esque.

And that first animation...what's it supposed to be, because it's awesome so far, besides the choppiness.

Your junk is much better than mine :(

Title: Re: A little dump of little dumplings.
Post by: Blick on December 13, 2006, 12:15:27 am

Looking at it all together, I fear you're spinning your wheels when trying to make stuff. It often looks the same. Male face with prominent cheekbones and mouth deep in shadow. You've varied it a bit, but it's still often the same look. It just reminds me of where I am now, just making what I know I can, rather than pushing myself to try something truly new.

I really like the one of Tremulant's character, I wish you would have finished that since you usually do so well with warped spiral like musculature.