Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: 1up on September 05, 2008, 01:05:59 am
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I have had artblock and the inability to finish anything all summer
that makes me a sad 1up >:
but I've been working on this one on and off for awhile
(http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/5348/1upkof2kvm7.png)
Still not sure whether to keep the hand or not, haven't had a lot of opinions either way so far.
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It's great so far and within the style but isn't that hand quite big for that head?
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hopefully fixed the problem with the hand, and almost finished the hair. still a few parts are bugging me
(http://img247.imageshack.us/img247/5031/1upkof2kii9.png)
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well the problem now is... where is this hand connected to the chest. If you draw the ommited parts you'll see the angle of the arm cannot belong to the body very comfortably.
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With his hand like that we would probably see his shoulder.
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not really sure if i got it this time :-\
(http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/7623/1upkof2kdx7.png)
also changed his shirt back to the color i had intended to make it when i was updating the design.
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This was the only thing that bothered me,
(http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc14/tuaarita/asd.png)
Maybe add some highlights to the hair, since it looks like it has some heavy gel in it, it should be a little shinier. :P
Everything else looks ace so far, keep going.