Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Garreth on March 12, 2011, 07:39:56 am

Title: My first proper run cycle
Post by: Garreth on March 12, 2011, 07:39:56 am

(http://i.imgur.com/ozYY4.gif)

I just thought I'd share this lil' guy.  :D

Please tell me how I could better the animation.

Title: Re: My first proper run cycle
Post by: Demian on March 12, 2011, 02:02:42 pm

So small but still so nice!
Hmm he looks like he is moving like a worm (shrink-expand-shrink-expand...). Maybe because at that size i can not tell the difference between his legs.
have u seen any references for the running cycle? there are many on this forum.

Title: Re: My first proper run cycle
Post by: Basketcase on March 14, 2011, 01:56:44 am

Maybe make the hair bounce and move. The stillness of it sticks out to me. The feet look pretty neat at that size, but they also could change shape, so he lifts his heel first, then toes.

Title: Re: My first proper run cycle
Post by: EvilEye on March 14, 2011, 05:12:19 am

I like it, it would further be enhanced by the face turning slightly from side to side.