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Torayaki

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Gazette:


I really wouldnt mind some help with the sleeves and some C+C on the folds and such. oh, and feel free to edit it, if you like.

Peppermint Pig:
The hair that can be seen below the one arm seems too bright. It seems like you nailed details in the other areas, so arms shouldn't be a problem. Perhaps avoid black outlines from multiple directions on the sleeves. Nice highlights on hair at the top. Crotch area seems too dark... black outline on his left/our right around the hip ends abruptly... seems odd.

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