Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Railslave on March 11, 2018, 10:03:51 am

Title: Homoousios
Post by: Railslave on March 11, 2018, 10:03:51 am

(https://i.imgur.com/QxpUbAu.png)

A C64 compo picture that has some pretty obvious flaws to me (due to how I tend to rush stuff near the end no doubt), but maybe some things I have over looked/am not even aware of at my level that might help me in the future.

Ptoing has been advising me with an emphasis on polishing stuff more but it would be cool to get some fresh eyes; perhaps bring up a fresh set of future challenges.

Title: Re: Homoousios
Post by: MysteryMeat on March 11, 2018, 11:04:14 pm

busted image link there lad

Title: Re: Homoousios
Post by: Railslave on March 12, 2018, 10:01:32 pm

You cannot see it ?

Title: Re: Homoousios
Post by: Curly on March 12, 2018, 10:11:21 pm

It works fine for me.

Title: Re: Homoousios
Post by: Railslave on March 12, 2018, 10:15:41 pm

This might have been a mistake to post as its a done deal, just wanted some feedback and things to consider for the future, but I understand that's not the best use of the forum, sorry  :(

Title: Re: Homoousios
Post by: Curly on March 12, 2018, 11:01:42 pm

I'm not familiar with C64 stuff and I'm not too sure what's going on in the image.
The only thing that bothers me is the dark gray line in the highlighted part and the shape of the bigger patch(?) of water for some reason.