Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Memo on December 26, 2008, 06:57:34 pm
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Hello, im sorta new here. ive been lurking for awhile now and posting here and there, but now i think ill desplay some stuff ive been working on.
I started this game back in september, currently named dawn using a small program called the Original Hamster Republic R.P.G. Creator Engine, or the OHRPGCE (OHR for short). anyways you can find a progress journal of it here: http://www.castleparadox.com/viewjournaltopic.php?t=717&postdays=0&postorder=asc&start=0
enought of me rambling, more screens.
(http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h238/the_dude257/dawn1.png)
title screen so far.
(http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h238/the_dude257/unnamedgunsmith.png)
An unnamed gunsmith (pic taken in the editor)
(http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h238/the_dude257/Image2.png)
A waterway, with some errors.
(http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h238/the_dude257/STUFF0000-1.jpg)
Olmin, a character of many colors.
(http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h238/the_dude257/princeofwhales.png)
The Prince of Whales, an optional boss (pic also taken in editor)
Well, there ya have it. ill post more as i make more content, thanks in advance for any critiques you guys can give me!
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Hey Memo, looking fairly good. I like that whale a lot, he is neat.
I would take the saturation down a bit on the grass though.
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Thanks, i knew something was wrong with the grass but i couldnt quite tell. the 200+ colors in the Prince of Whales picture is the master pallet i have to work with and all the colors in the game HAVE to come from there, so finding the right colors sometimes can be difficult. Anyways thanks for the advice! :D
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While everything's not bad, you're not taking some things realistically. The islands in the water, etc, look like they change from green to blue randomly. There should be a waterline, and it should look as if they are cutting into the water rather than just changing colors. If you don't understand, I could edit. :)
Also, with your grass tiles, they're nice, but Vierbit made a great post about grass tile variation. It gives it more readability and makes tiling less obvious.
http://www.wayofthepixel.net/pixelation/index.php?topic=7538.msg86392#msg86392
It's a good read! Check it out.
Keep up the good work!