Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Pinux on April 01, 2016, 06:21:34 pm

Title: [C+C] Space ship
Post by: Pinux on April 01, 2016, 06:21:34 pm

I'm back! ;D And I have free time now so I would like to get some feed back as far as this little ship goes although I know that there is too much detail on it

Version 1
(http://i.imgur.com/pvpMI3o.png)

Version 2
(http://i.imgur.com/EkElC5j.png)

Version 3
(http://i.imgur.com/e3or7Di.png)

Title: Re: [C+C] Space ship
Post by: rocifier on April 02, 2016, 06:37:32 am

The style reminds me of Raptor call of shadows. I suggest looking at their ships as an example of how you could improve it. I suspect you have too much contrast, and you need to balance the detail with space. Star wars is a great example of that.

Title: Re: [C+C] Space ship
Post by: Pinux on April 03, 2016, 12:52:34 pm

Edit: (http://i.imgur.com/EkElC5j.png)

Thanks you for the suggestion :y:

Title: Re: [C+C] Space ship
Post by: Pinux on April 03, 2016, 05:02:33 pm

Quote from: rocifier on April 02, 2016, 06:37:32 am

The style reminds me of Raptor call of shadows. I suggest looking at their ships as an example of how you could improve it. I suspect you have too much contrast, and you need to balance the detail with space. Star wars is a great example of that.

I think I have changed up the colors I think this might be better ;D
(http://i.imgur.com/e3or7Di.png)

Title: Re: [C+C] Space ship
Post by: Chadtech on April 03, 2016, 06:49:31 pm

I think it looks really cool, but also, I have a hard time understanding what it is. I wouldnt have guessed it was a ship if you hadnt said so. Are we looking at it from the top, or head on?

Title: Re: [C+C] Space ship
Post by: Pinux on April 05, 2016, 04:04:58 pm

Kind of like pokemon  :-[ view well when your moving around

Title: Re: [C+C] Space ship
Post by: rocifier on April 06, 2016, 07:24:55 am

I think you need to define the form better and focus around that. This means clear edges, faces, or curved surfaces. Right now its kind of like a mass of christmas lights or something, you can't really tell what it is clearly or what angle it's at. Think of it as a 3D model, you know before they are textures they have facets that are very clearly readable.

Title: Re: [C+C] Space ship
Post by: Pinux on April 07, 2016, 01:00:57 pm

Quote from: rocifier on April 06, 2016, 07:24:55 am

I think you need to define the form better and focus around that. This means clear edges, faces, or curved surfaces. Right now its kind of like a mass of christmas lights or something, you can't really tell what it is clearly or what angle it's at. Think of it as a 3D model, you know before they are textures they have facets that are very clearly readable.

Love christmas lights :y: ;D but I get do get what you are saying about it I'll try and remove most detail and see what I come up with