Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: MdNight on January 10, 2009, 01:08:43 am
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Been working on this just for fun I would like some tips on how to shade her dress as well as C&C on what I got so far
(http://img58.imageshack.us/img58/5482/angel4aq3.png)
Ref:http://www.reiterstahl.hotbox.ru/images/lac/albums/lac-inferno-g.jpg
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Not sure about the shading on the dress. Feathers and skin look good so far, though her proportions are off. The head is far too tall. Try tracing it and you'll see what I mean.
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Ah i saw what you mean the face is way bigger compare to her arm, I think i fix it
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Stop and go back to your reference. There are a lot of flaws in the construction. Maybe you were trying to change the pose but it hasn't worked at all. I think you probably haven't spent enough time drawing humans. The upper half seems to be inflated and the shoulders are too rounded. Her visible arm looks pretty mangled and small in comparison to the rest. The waist and hips aren't correctly constructed and the hips are probably not wide enough given your reference image. I suggest starting again and developing correct line art before colouring.