Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: NarutoOrigins on January 26, 2010, 10:03:37 pm

Title: Naruto Origins.
Post by: NarutoOrigins on January 26, 2010, 10:03:37 pm
Well it may be a new project but i just wanted some crits before i go on and complete my games base.
Thanks in adv :3 PS dont mind the red thing it was a mistake eh cant be assed to explain t-t..(http://img690.imageshack.us/img690/8234/hudscroll.png)

Oh heres the stuff just in case you wanna do a quick edit.
(http://img18.imageshack.us/img18/6777/sendpixelation.png)


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Lol iv been doing alout of work since i posted this topic and improving my skills

(http://img509.imageshack.us/img509/9339/face1v.png)
Hud mugshots hp/ch bars arent added yet

as for the base i really like how it came out but it doesnt look very narutoish colours =p
(http://img137.imageshack.us/img137/2781/human.gif)(http://img682.imageshack.us/img682/2150/veryupset.png)
Im not very happy with my animations D:
Title: Re: Naruto Origins.
Post by: Eskiboy on January 28, 2010, 06:40:47 pm
Hey there, Your base looks fine... only thing i would say is about the boulder rock thing:
You should stick with your game arts light source and keep it consistent, Since its looking rather cartoony keep that style up to... here is what i got
(http://img709.imageshack.us/img709/9956/94888055.png)
Title: Re: Naruto Origins.
Post by: Photocopier on January 28, 2010, 08:15:17 pm
Quote from: Eskiboy on January 28, 2010, 06:40:47 pm
Hey there, Your base looks fine... only thing i would say is about the boulder rock thing:
You should stick with your game arts light source and keep it consistent, Since its looking rather cartoony keep that style up to... here is what i got
(http://img709.imageshack.us/img709/9956/94888055.png)
I much prefer the boulder as is actually.
Title: Re: Naruto Origins.
Post by: Eskiboy on January 28, 2010, 08:29:31 pm
Oh right sorry, i was just providing my own opinion on the topic :P
Title: Re: Naruto Origins.
Post by: BrokenEdge on January 28, 2010, 08:30:30 pm
Quote from: Eskiboy on January 28, 2010, 06:40:47 pm
You should stick with your game arts light source and keep it consistent,
The two guys punching at the top have the exact same light as well. I'm fairly new to this but I think one on the left needs the light source changed.
(http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v199/jop7821/Left.png)
Title: Re: Naruto Origins.
Post by: NarutoOrigins on January 31, 2010, 06:36:29 pm
Lol iv been doing alout of work since i posted this topic and improving my skills

(http://img509.imageshack.us/img509/9339/face1v.png)
Hud mugshots hp/ch bars arent added yet

as for the base i really like how it came out but it doesnt look very narutoish colours =p
(http://img137.imageshack.us/img137/2781/human.gif)(http://img682.imageshack.us/img682/2150/veryupset.png)
Im not very happy with my animations D: