Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: sam-uk on September 20, 2009, 07:53:17 am

Title: [WIP] Baseball Player
Post by: sam-uk on September 20, 2009, 07:53:17 am

Here's a lil something I knocked up and I'm basically looking for CC & any advice on making him look more realistic/detailed as opposed to cartoony even at the size it is, cheers.  :yell:

(http://i35.tinypic.com/okbcpc.gif)
@Lizzrd - your comment helped alot
(http://i34.tinypic.com/wch93o.gif)
@Sinistral Erim - tried to bulk the shoulders up
(http://i38.tinypic.com/fkw2kw.gif)
(http://i38.tinypic.com/f409x1.gif)

Title: Re: [WIP] Baseball Player
Post by: Lizzrd on September 20, 2009, 08:11:52 am

The left leg should not bend like that, it should be more like 
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Title: Re: [WIP] Baseball Player
Post by: Sinistral Erim on September 20, 2009, 10:55:14 pm

Is he a teenager? The shoulders seem too narrow.

The sprite also lacks volume. Apart from the colored outlines it appears to have no shadows at all. It should be darker at the feet and lighter at the head, also.

I really like his face, though :D but it really contributes to this cartoony feel...