Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: D-bones on August 03, 2010, 04:01:19 am
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Hi there, I just discovered this place today and decided I'd share some stuff I've done and I hope to be a productive member of the community.
Anyways, here's my works:
Something I just did today (a WIP)
(http://i119.photobucket.com/albums/o132/D-bones/blah.png)
A couple of monsters from an RPG Maker Game I'm making
(http://i119.photobucket.com/albums/o132/D-bones/Dindien.png)
(http://i119.photobucket.com/albums/o132/D-bones/Garg.png)
(http://i119.photobucket.com/albums/o132/D-bones/Blu.png)
(http://i119.photobucket.com/albums/o132/D-bones/Deskelly.png)
(http://i119.photobucket.com/albums/o132/D-bones/Abbadan.png)
(http://i119.photobucket.com/albums/o132/D-bones/assorted.png)
(http://i119.photobucket.com/albums/o132/D-bones/Warmachine.png)
The Charger from L4D2
(http://i119.photobucket.com/albums/o132/D-bones/Charger.png)
And a Mother 3 picture
(http://i119.photobucket.com/albums/o132/D-bones/MUDDATRIPLE.png)
I'm still learning and (hopefully) getting better each day. I'd appreciate any critiques and suggestions on how I can improve.
I hope we can make some great art together!
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Welcome! ;D
It's looks like your capable of a range of styles, and your work definitely shows promise.
However, I'm concerned that you might have a general tendency to leave out large shadow regions.
The best example might be your 'abbadan' rendition. It seems to rely solely on outlines to define his shape when there is a good opportunity to use shadows.
(http://i119.photobucket.com/albums/o132/D-bones/Abbadan.png)
If we pick a light source above, we can create a strong contrast between his underbelly and say, his shoulders. The strong value changes work to differentiate the limbs and the gradual value changes can define the form.
Here's just a quick edit to show you what I'm talking about. Hope this helps.
(http://i38.tinypic.com/2ijosvo.png)