Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Ergo__proxy on February 20, 2017, 12:17:49 pm

Title: hello
Post by: Ergo__proxy on February 20, 2017, 12:17:49 pm

hello everyone, im new in pixel art and i wanna learn everything for create sprite and animation for videogame.
this my first one , sorry for my poor english but im from italy :P  (http://i.imgur.com/AUAVoAv.png)

Title: Re: hello
Post by: Sersch on February 21, 2017, 04:52:40 pm

hello there.
i'm not a top expert but i would suggest to add some highlights to the tail, as i imagine its a slicky snake tail. Also the bottom part of the tail looks maybe a bit plain.
The forehead shading is also a bit off, the highlights suggest that the light comes from the top but the forehead looks dark.

Title: Re: hello
Post by: Aniki on February 22, 2017, 09:01:16 am

Hm, well my biggest problem was the kink in his tail. It bends really sharply. A snake would slither with it's tail flat on the ground, I tried to make it look like an S-shape still

(http://i.imgur.com/t0is8Tv.png)

I also played with reducing the colors a bit, and I tried to make the arms the same shape. I'm not thrilled with those changes though so take it as you will.

Title: Re: hello
Post by: Ergo__proxy on February 23, 2017, 01:23:31 am

(http://i.imgur.com/OW7tc6H.png)                                                                                                                         
thakns for the help guys
i made some changes, because the tail Anatomy wasnt good.
but still have some problem with tail shadow, im working on it!