Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Vladoune on August 14, 2015, 02:58:49 pm
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Hey everybody, first post here hoping to get some criticism over my first work. Little background :
I'm working on pixel art for a platformer I am making with friends. I want the game to have a 'retro' feel kind of like SNES or something like that, so not many colors and every pixels count.
So here's the guy :
(http://i.imgur.com/0oi0oDr.png)
I think i'm satisfied about the colors but i'm skeptical about the posture. It's his 'idle' position by the way.
I also have a running animation with another version of the character with more 'shading' I guess. Very not satisfied with this one, I have trouble make it feel right.
(http://i.imgur.com/DkLS8nC.gif)
If you have tips on how to improve it that would be awesome :)
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way better than i could do, im terrible at sprites and animations.
i think his waist looks a little off.. the orange looks like his torso stretched to low.. maybe add a belt or something to make him look less stretched in the area?
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Pretty obvious now that you point it out.. thanks
Quick edit :
(http://i.imgur.com/C9nmafZ.png)
It does look better but i feel like his torso is a little too straight ? Or am I just paranoid