-The blue space near the legs of the character looks very out of place. and same goes for the white space. It's too bright and plain.oops :blind:
-The monster can use a bit of a make-up since it's really difficult to see and make out at first glance.ah yes! I had no idea how to fix this, but then flashbulb happened, thus, now i have attempted to fix it
The "spotlight" should bounce around a bit more light on the environment? (I'm not sure, though. Just saying what I think.)i believe not, the spotlight is facing the viewer (although if this was real life, it wouldn't), therefore, the only light it goes into is your face, which if i am correct, is outside the drawing :D
I think the ground can also benefit from small props and irregularities.
-The shading on the trees and the monster seems very conservative.the trees: low importance, low detail
It's done really well though, it's leagues better than what I can do right now.thank you
(http://i.imgur.com/4dXwhSR.png)sir, i give you many thanks
Only edited colours and the rocks a little.
The two problems I have with this are that the grass distracts too much attention and the monster blends into the background too much except for the tongue, which is very bright.
I doubt there is a colour that works both for the monster and the background. I also think that the purple and blue trees should have their colours reversed, but that would give you a problem with the trees behind the ink thing.
By the way, are the things on the ground casting shadows rocks or grass? I assumed rocks, because the shading is rather extreme for grass.
The ground color is so similar to the purple mid-tone of the monster that I can barely see the difference between them, but it is being used as a highlight color on the monster at the same time as it outlines edges of the monsterah, even when i added a purple higlight color, i forgot to actually apply it :blind:
A couple of the blue trees are in front of, and overlapping brown trees. This make blue trees appear actually blue rather than just paler from distance. Maybe this is what you intend? If not, it would make more sense if the trees progressed to blue as they progress back and away from the warm light.that was residue from the first version, if you see it, you see that the trees go blue to dark purple (continuation of blue), so it looks better