Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: ZoSo on August 25, 2007, 10:36:05 pm

Title: Galaxy ( Ages since i pixeled )
Post by: ZoSo on August 25, 2007, 10:36:05 pm
Wow.. its been ages since i last pixeled.. Just a little w.i.p. Soon to be finnished.

(http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/3408/galaxyqa3.png)
Title: Re: Galaxy ( Ages since i pixeled )
Post by: fil_razorback on August 25, 2007, 11:10:41 pm
-Beautiful colors. I really dig these but maybe you could d-ive into pure white in the center.

-Is the blocky center of stylistic choice or a WIP trace ? -
I hope it's just a WIP effect, such a piece requires a lot of dithering and AAing I think.

-My only real crit is that your galaxy looks more like concentric circles than a spiral which it is supposed to be.

Good luck for completing this =)
Title: Re: Galaxy ( Ages since i pixeled )
Post by: ZoSo on August 25, 2007, 11:15:20 pm
Its very w.i.p. in the middle.

Ive only finnished the left-bottom part. And yeah, thanks :).
Title: Re: Galaxy ( Ages since i pixeled )
Post by: Dusty on August 25, 2007, 11:31:35 pm
Ya, you need to go with pure white in the middle, emphasis on the bright light is a must.
Also, right now it seems the arms are going to be boring. You should put bright stars and lights in there to break up the darkness. I can see you're putting in stars, but there should be bright ones that stand out, actually a lot of them. Make sure you smooth them out though, not just bright pixels.
Title: Re: Galaxy ( Ages since i pixeled )
Post by: BlueCheer on August 26, 2007, 06:15:09 am
just wondering why are the squares in the middle (pixels) so much more bigger then the rest or completely square? any way  :y:
Title: Re: Galaxy ( Ages since i pixeled )
Post by: bengo on August 26, 2007, 06:39:29 am
Ack, it's you! This piece needs moar stars, just more crap in the bg in general, the 2nd darkest color could be a little grayer and darker.