Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Rnd on July 15, 2006, 01:04:31 pm

Title: Ogre family
Post by: Rnd on July 15, 2006, 01:04:31 pm

(http://i52.photobucket.com/albums/g11/Rnd2/stump2.png)(http://i52.photobucket.com/albums/g11/Rnd2/ma.png)

Just the dad and the mom for now, I am making the ogre baby still :P

Priginally it was just the first one when someone suggested an ogre family and I thought that was a nice idea...


any pointers in improving these appreciated.

Title: Re: Ogre family
Post by: Matriax on July 15, 2006, 01:15:32 pm

Good work.

I play with hue/colors and contrast:

(http://img123.imageshack.us/img123/1686/editogreft5.gif)

But well i not know what is the style you looking...

The muscles are good, but the legs of the "father" seems litle confuse, i think is to much detailed.

And think need more the tailed the brown dress.

Title: Re: Ogre family
Post by: Alex on July 15, 2006, 10:23:43 pm

im sure that you are trying to go for a certain style, desat and all...but i dont think that the actually image benefits from such colours...

my edits:

(http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v81/Marshy/ogrefamily.png)

Title: Re: Ogre family
Post by: Larwick on July 16, 2006, 12:02:18 am

To be honest, i prefer Rnd's palette to your edits. It's murky and ogre-like, seems to fit the style and what it needs to be to me. I really like them, can't wait for updates.

Title: Re: Ogre family
Post by: Feron on July 16, 2006, 11:29:00 am

I think Matriax's bottom edit is nice aswell as Cir's first edit (but Cirs seem a bit OTT with saturation).