Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Grynz on February 26, 2007, 01:10:01 am
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(http://img81.imageshack.us/img81/2808/wipvc5.png)
Early WIP. Need C+C on anatomy, and some ideas to make the piece more impressive.
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Hey there, Grynz. Right now, just a glaring imperfection in this piece is the fact that he has 4 abs. I like it otherwise, but I'm not into the whole anatomy thing.
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We need more to actually critique. However, please do fix the abs. And I like his hand/fingers. Very nice. :y:
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Horus is normally illustrated as a man with a falcons head, so what I'd suggest you do first is change the lineart to reflect that.
Like this perhaps: http://www.hieroglyphen-info.de/bilder/goetter/horus.jpg
I'm more of a fan of the stargate designs of Horus though, http://screenshots.filesnetwork.com/69/files2/40436_1.jpg is a more developed one.