Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Zach on December 16, 2006, 09:12:46 pm

Title: self portrait
Post by: Zach on December 16, 2006, 09:12:46 pm

(http://i52.photobucket.com/albums/g23/artfocker/friendlier.png)

anything?

Title: Re: self portrait
Post by: Souly on December 16, 2006, 09:15:40 pm

The eyes seem just a little small.
In comparison to the cheek's / cheek bones.

Is the hair still WIP?
Or are you planning on keeping it how is?

Title: Re: self portrait
Post by: Zach on December 16, 2006, 09:15:57 pm

I don't know yet.

Title: Re: self portrait
Post by: Skull on December 16, 2006, 09:38:00 pm

The red is pretty snazzy.. I like it, it's a nice touch.
Lovely shade effect on the face, looking very impressive overall.

Title: Re: self portrait
Post by: AlexHW on December 16, 2006, 10:21:55 pm

i like it.. he looks a bit indian.
one thing which bothers me is how his nose ridge is blending into the area under his eyes. theres a funny wrinkle which makes it seem like some odd flab of skin there. There however shouldnt be much fatty skin there..

Title: Re: self portrait
Post by: xanthier on December 16, 2006, 10:30:24 pm

I agree, it looks like a strip of skin or fatty tissue, lays across the bridge of the nose and under the eyes. reminds me of some kind of scarring the way that it looks shiny.

Title: Re: self portrait
Post by: Blick on December 16, 2006, 10:38:36 pm

Yes, fix the bridge of the nose issue. Also, I like the hair how it is since it brings more attention to the face.

Also, I think this is the first time I've seen any sort of image of you without headphones.

Title: Re: self portrait
Post by: Zach on December 17, 2006, 01:27:50 pm

ty for the comments, yeah now that I look at it the bridge is pretty messed up atm... bbl