Official OT-Creativity Thread 2

[Dr D]

I went through the game twice and still don't think I know exactly what the fish were for.

It was pretty short, definitely want more. That aside though, the graphics and music were awesome.

These mysterious games and their mysterious endings though, I guess I'm not smart enough to figure out the deeper meanings if there is any. I was just kind of like 'Huh?' at the end. 'What did I just play?'.

[Shrike]

Very nice little game.  I played it just now, but it's morning so the sound is off.  I love it though.  The ending was interesting.  It was depressing, and I don't get it, but I like it lots.  I also like the idea of a boss you're not supposed to kill and can't.

 

Nice game.  Moar pweez!

[ter-o]

Ending?  I wandered around the water for 10 minutes and then quitted coz I didn't know what to do... maybe I'm just stupid... or impatient. But other than that I really liked the looks and gameplay of it!

[Shrike]

I was feeling unusually inspired/poetic/amorous/bored and wrote one/three poems.

They work on their own, but you can combine- you'll see.
Here:
Frugality distracts.
  Quick, before your life contracts!
Lose your satellite TV,
  Spend some time with a tree.
Trees: your oldest neighbor.
  They are not known to flaber,
They are Where cats reside,
  To be rescued and brought inside.
Inside.  Inside, we find our cages.
  Homes are our stages.
We distract reality,
  prettying it up with
Hopeless frugality.
Suggestions?  Comments?  Derailments?  Meant to be read aloud.  Sort of.  I have no guts, so it hasn't been read to family/girlfriend* yet.
*Damn it, I keep calling her that.  It's not what it is, much to my dismay.  now we're 'just friends'.     She was/remains to be my best friend, and we tried out the amorous thing and it just didn't work.  It wasn't working, really, but I do love her.  Whether she loves/loved me I have no real idea.  And now she doesn't really talk to me. 

Sorry, I needed that emotional drain.      I never got around to talking about it with anyone, and I'm quite female in that sense; I can't hold it in.

Anyway.
Done ranting.  Go about your business!
Shrike
All welcome. 
Shrike

[Atnas]

I like how it loops back on itself, its nice that it breaks from the formal start to finish poetry.

Girl troubles? All I have are the wise words of Courage Wolf.

[Rydin]

http://www.myspace.com/yarntonsils

If only people would give me money for this 

[Mathias]

Not getting the use of frugality there, Shrike; confusing. Nice writin' though. You're bound to endure at least a few women situations like that in your time, consider it progress. And wait . .  flaber? Sorry.

[dead_pool]

Practicing light, since I definitely need practice in the area. I also want critique, and please try to ignore the badly drawn head and critique my light and shadow, considering this sketch was about 5 minutes lol

[xhunterko]

Oh, and if you guys want to hear some excellent chiptune music, I suggest going to this site: www.iimusic.net
I think my favorite artist is probably Alex Mauer on there right now.

[Cow]

You should invest in a scanner, that image is very blurry and thus quite difficult to critique.

Oh, and if you guys want to hear some excellent chiptune music, I suggest going to this site: www.iimusic.net
I think my favorite artist is probably Alex Mauer on there right now.

I'm actually making some album covers for an upcoming Phlogiston release which'll be on that site. I'll probably post the stuff on here for critique soon, so watch for that too.