@Grinner (& Ryu & Mathias): Wow, for an etch-a-sketch that's actually pretty neat. Pretty unusual to see someone accomplished in that medium.
Everything above that, though, needs some work.
@Jad: Nice. A dwarf? It was pretty hard to tell where his left leg was but otherwise it's actually pretty cool.
As for me, it's funny because I don't usually draw anthros (this badly).
It's kinda big.I can see lots of things wrong with it myself, so critique away! If you want.