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Re: Mockup Frenzy #2: Ninjas!

Reply #40 on: September 13, 2007, 05:47:55 pm
OK. :D The ninja's arm could still use some work, though. His hands are tiny.


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Re: Mockup Frenzy #2: Ninjas!

Reply #41 on: September 13, 2007, 08:08:23 pm

I figured I'd go with the more 'Strider-like anime ninja in a futuristic setting'.

I love this one, it's so full of action and movement. Plus it looks like it is straight out of a GBA/DS game!

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Re: Mockup Frenzy #2: Ninjas!

Reply #42 on: September 13, 2007, 08:18:56 pm
Hey.  New to the forum here, and I love this place. 
So here's a wip, the game is where you are a chef and a painting of an old master chef tells you how to cook stuff. 



This is great. As an game idea. It's not so well visualised. But it's funny - off the wall... like that one that ALIENQUARK did... it's quirky. Not that the others aren't good, I just think a lot are a bit derivative as far as games go... (obviously I can see that Joe's game is Cookie Mama so I guess that's derivative also - but it is novel- "What ninja do in their spare time, hobbies etc..." and off course they DO have to eat!)
 
Well done Joe, I think you should finish it off.
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Re: Mockup Frenzy #2: Ninjas!

Reply #43 on: September 13, 2007, 08:35:16 pm
Arachne, I love the blurred floor reflection.
CroM, you can barely notice the second, lighter shade in lit surface of the building above the entrance. I'd make it stand out a little bit more or remove it. Bloody excellent piece though.

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Re: Mockup Frenzy #2: Ninjas!

Reply #44 on: September 14, 2007, 08:24:24 am
After seeing Joe's entry and Baccaman's comment, I think it'd be awesome to have a ninja game with Ninja's tackling everyday obstacles... in ninja-like ways.

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Re: Mockup Frenzy #2: Ninjas!

Reply #45 on: September 14, 2007, 09:16:30 am
I was only paraphrasing what Adam said in the notes...  :P
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Re: Mockup Frenzy #2: Ninjas!

Reply #46 on: September 15, 2007, 12:08:50 pm
Hey.  New to the forum here, and I love this place. 
So here's a wip, the game is where you are a chef and a painting of an old master chef tells you how to cook stuff. 


This game (and all these games) would obviously take place at 1000x the speed of light.
Due to the known fact that ninjas are that fast.

But seriously, I like the idea behind this.
The ninja looks good at the moment, the hat could do with some work though.
His left arm is wonky at the moment, could be because of the hand.
I think it too could use perhaps a movement trail right now kinda looks like he's tossing it backwards.
And if that's the case then his movement trail should be the opposite way.

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Re: Mockup Frenzy #2: Ninjas!

Reply #47 on: September 17, 2007, 09:25:40 pm
Welp that wraps up this activity!  WIPpers you are welcome to finish your pieces, I will update them when I'm able (or you can overwrite the images in those URLs).  See you all at MF3!