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(C&C) Posting progress for feedback.

on: April 28, 2017, 03:07:23 am
Hello artists !

I wanted to post some of my drawings for constructive (and destructive if you want) feedback.

Any comment is appreciated.

First Version:

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First Version:

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Re: (C&C) Posting progress for feedback.

Reply #1 on: April 28, 2017, 09:14:22 am
I honestly like the beta version of the smog zombie guy better, feels less... Generically threatening, I guess?

Like, the original design feels more emblematic of stagnation and rot with his slav squatting and chilled expression.

The others are like, "oh hey, a deemons" save the left guy who has more of a shadowy ghostly vibe.
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