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new characterto

on: April 15, 2017, 08:07:09 pm
today i made this!

im starting get confident with pixel art!

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Re: new characterto

Reply #1 on: April 15, 2017, 08:23:56 pm
woa! It is so cool.
It reminds me of that guy with a trident in hunger games!
I'm an unsure, unconfident, aspiring game developer.
Thank you for any suggestions.

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Re: new characterto

Reply #2 on: April 15, 2017, 10:19:51 pm
Pretty good! His rightmos arm seems unnaturally rigid though, remember that arms bend!
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Re: new characterto

Reply #3 on: April 16, 2017, 06:11:22 am
thanx guys
i did some edit on MM tips

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Re: new characterto

Reply #4 on: April 16, 2017, 06:19:18 am
Nnnnot quite fixing it! The problem isn't in the shading, it's in the pose. Try holding your arm down that straight, it's uncomfortable to hold and makes him look more tense and awkward than he should!
arms usually retain a slight bit of bend to them when relaxed, rather than falling completely straight. Same for fingers and even legs!
EDIT: you should also play around with his shoulder, looking at it a bit zoomed in it looks like his arm is kind of pasted over everything thanks to the lack of transition between his chest and arm. Pull the arm out a pixel, give it a proper bend.

and if you're specifically going for the hand on hip thing try to imply the arm bending behind the back some!
« Last Edit: April 16, 2017, 06:21:15 am by MysteryMeat »
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Re: new characterto

Reply #5 on: April 16, 2017, 07:32:18 am
ok i tried to work with shoulder and give him a lil bit transition with the chest

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Re: new characterto

Reply #6 on: April 16, 2017, 08:12:52 am
While good attempt, I was actually talking about the other arm this whole time, ahaha

The new arm pose feels slightly more organic but the trade-off is a strange pinch on his pectoral there.


The back arm is the too-straight-pasted-looking one, sorry for the confusion!
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Re: new characterto

Reply #7 on: April 16, 2017, 01:53:01 pm
While good attempt, I was actually talking about the other arm this whole time, ahaha

The new arm pose feels slightly more organic but the trade-off is a strange pinch on his pectoral there.


The back arm is the too-straight-pasted-looking one, sorry for the confusion!

ok this was funny ahahah!
at least in the end we understood each other lol!
some edit


and final version i hope
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Re: new characterto

Reply #8 on: April 16, 2017, 08:59:16 pm
 :y:much better!
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Re: new characterto

Reply #9 on: April 18, 2017, 06:35:19 pm
new character

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Re: new characterto

Reply #10 on: April 18, 2017, 07:45:40 pm
Awesome new char!
I'm an unsure, unconfident, aspiring game developer.
Thank you for any suggestions.

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Re: new characterto

Reply #11 on: April 18, 2017, 07:55:34 pm
new character

Pretty good, though her waist looks a bit too cinched up and her camera-left arm is a bit stubby.
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Re: new characterto

Reply #12 on: April 18, 2017, 08:27:53 pm
new character

Pretty good, though her waist looks a bit too cinched up and her camera-left arm is a bit stubby.
Awesome new char!
thank for the feedback guys
tomorrow gonna tweaking arm and waist, today im a bit tired