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[WIP] Villain

on: April 06, 2017, 11:20:11 pm

Hello friends! I'm trying to make a "final boss" type of character. How can I improve this sprite?

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Re: [WIP] Villain

Reply #1 on: April 06, 2017, 11:37:02 pm
There's a lot of wind blowing their hair, but the clothing isn't affected by that same wind at all. Give it some dramatic billowing!

Is there a story behind this character? At a glance, the colours and posing don't read as "villain" or "boss" to me.

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Re: [WIP] Villain

Reply #2 on: April 06, 2017, 11:39:50 pm
I'd give them an intimidating mask, like what samurai used to wear. The face and color scheme are both a bit underwhelming, has more of a tubby c leric vibe to me than anything else!
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Re: [WIP] Villain

Reply #3 on: April 07, 2017, 02:59:15 am

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Re: [WIP] Villain

Reply #4 on: April 07, 2017, 03:16:15 am
Tops work, looks very villainy now. Kinda puts me in mind of that one guy from berzerk!
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