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Feedback and Opinions on first piece?

on: April 05, 2017, 05:33:24 am
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Re: Feedback and Opinions on first piece?

Reply #1 on: April 05, 2017, 03:33:01 pm
The first impression I had was that the green fog fading was too abrupt in contrast with how visible is the last tree before the fog so that definetly flattens it, also I know on the center is supposed to be a tree behind in the fog but to me it looks like the shadow from the last tree before the fog projected on a green wall (adds strenght to the flattening effect), that combo-ed with the spotlight kind of light coming from the top, it kind of make it seems like a setup from theatre stage in my opinion. I like the colors in that gem and the characters :)
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Re: Feedback and Opinions on first piece?

Reply #2 on: April 05, 2017, 07:19:02 pm
Hm, yeah I'd use a yellow or gold for that spotlight to imply sunlight.
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