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Ninja Idle Critique Wanted please !

on: April 03, 2017, 04:09:58 am
I would really appreciate if anyone could critique this animation. I feel like i could make the animation a little more lively since this is supposed to go in a fighting game. thanks and feel free to change up the animation in anyway you want!


« Last Edit: April 04, 2017, 09:25:30 pm by coconutcricket »
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Re: Ninja Idle Critique Wanted !

Reply #1 on: April 03, 2017, 04:10:38 am
ignore this =)
« Last Edit: April 05, 2017, 08:37:06 pm by coconutcricket »
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Re: Ninja Idle Critique Wanted !

Reply #2 on: April 03, 2017, 04:22:10 am
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Re: Ninja Idle Critique Wanted !

Reply #3 on: April 03, 2017, 05:07:18 am
Upload it to an image hosting site and use the direct URL in between the image tags. You've linked us to the file on your local machine, which we have no access to.

Find an image hosting site (imgur, google drive, amazon s3, photobucket, imageshack, etc) and upload your image, then get the direct url (right click > copy imgae link) and put it in between the image tags.

see here for more info (http://pixelation.org/pixelation/index.php?topic=3466.0)

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Re: Ninja Idle Critique Wanted !

Reply #4 on: April 03, 2017, 11:18:50 am
thanks yaoman it wasnt working from my google drive but through imgur it worked. much love
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Re: Ninja Idle Critique Wanted please !

Reply #5 on: April 05, 2017, 08:10:03 pm
bump. if anyone could help I would greatly appreciate it. ive seen the animations on this site and everyone seems to know a lot more than me
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Re: Ninja Idle Critique Wanted please !

Reply #6 on: April 05, 2017, 08:45:38 pm
Start a new layer and go over each frame again, try to keep lines steadier and correct movement gaffes like the twitchy feet.

Instead of relying on us, try to train yourself to spot some flaws then run it by folks!
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http://pixelation.org/index.php?topic=19838.0 also go suggest on my quest, cmon
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Re: Ninja Idle Critique Wanted please !

Reply #7 on: April 06, 2017, 01:49:18 am
Edit: i tried overall cleaning up the animation especially the legs


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i was considering adding a clenching fist animation to it but I couldnt get it right...
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Re: Ninja Idle Critique Wanted please !

Reply #8 on: April 06, 2017, 01:52:26 am
Still too rough! Your proportions and linework are jumping all over the place, try to keep lines rigid and curves stable!
And you still gotta work on stabilizing those feet, feet don't tend to wiggle like that!
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Re: Ninja Idle Critique Wanted please !

Reply #9 on: April 06, 2017, 02:39:11 am
How does this one look, I tried reducing foot wiggle like you said and cleaned up the legs

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