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[WIP][CC] Adventurer

on: March 22, 2017, 11:54:18 pm
Hey, i tried some kind of a mix of pixel & concept art. Working with this amount of pixels is quite unusual for me as i do mostly 16 bit like sprites. Its an Adventurer:



Any kind of critique and suggestions are very welcome!

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Re: [WIP][CC] Adventurer

Reply #1 on: March 23, 2017, 01:46:04 am
Looks solid to my eyes design ways, but the grey gloves kind of meld into the red of the cloak a bit. Makes it look like it's a pauldron/shoulder guard rather than a gloved hand!
Also, go back over the shading while keeping the light source in mind. It's hard to tell if it's coming from above-left or middle-left because of some inconsistencies on the brim of the hat, the scroll, and the gloves.
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Re: [WIP][CC] Adventurer

Reply #2 on: April 05, 2017, 09:53:19 pm
Thanks for the suggestions, tried to incorparate them and did some other little changes:

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Re: [WIP][CC] Adventurer

Reply #3 on: April 05, 2017, 11:02:56 pm
I'm afraid I'm not seeing much difference here, mate! Keep tweaking it, best i can say for it is the right glove melds in slightly-less.
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Re: [WIP][CC] Adventurer

Reply #4 on: April 06, 2017, 04:20:48 pm
There's not a lot of contrast between the medium shade and the dark shade on the robes.  It almost looks like one flat colour unless you zoom in or look closely.  As well the outline colour of the left (right?) shoulder (the one with the shield) is a little awkward.